I was enamoured by your candid beauty,
Your hair being the epitome of panache..
A sweet smile always shone,
with ecstasy floating in the air..
I showered you with cornucopia of love,
relieved you of all weariness..
Your gentle touch on my face,
lit a torch of warmth within my heart..
A trust that could never wither,
A song that could never end,
Collapsed.. in the blink of an eye..
Perhaps, another prey of the malice,
of your pure face, but hideous mind..
You seek for many I know now,
you are succumbed to the gaiety pleasures..
your audacity, to still smile at me,
like nothing ever went wrong...
The abhorrence,
The feeling to see strangulation scars,
on the place which holds my precious gift..
Slitting your veins with the same diamond..
Seeing your pretty face blood stained,
that once showed me the face of love...
Your plea to let go off you,
When I ram my head onto yours,
for betraying my mad love...
There would be justice to this besetment..
you wouldn't flaunt your protean talent..
but when I ease the knife in your gut,
I'd still love you..
There would be tears in my eyes,
while I lie beside you on the proscenium,
with the blade through my heart,
and the curtains close behind me..
8 comments:
i love the "i ram my head into yours bit"
and it saddened me somehow the tone
U know, there r jus sum of ur posts I simply dunno wat 2 say yaar...I'm not tryin 2 sound mean or stupid, it's jus I'm never sure I really know wat U're tryin 2 convey...is it really wat's given or somethin else...oh n dis sorta reminds me of d Neruda poem V did- 'Tonight I can write'...
@ poo
he's trying to convey that he can write hehehe :P
I know I can write.. :P Ofcourse a blog is to convey that only.. bum..
that's what i said bum :P what else? is that your life's story?:P pointing out the obvious so why do you react :P
i thought it was lovely!!! very... felt. and i don agree with pooji abt it being like the neruda poem coz i don think neruda was ever this violently angry with her when he wrote it. but i do relate to that feeling.. the way you feel so vulnerably angry when you're betrayed, maybe not necessarily by a lover, but jus generally too.
lovely post man, it really touched me. i love the way you've put into words that anger, the very images you have in your mind when it happens. lol i think everyone i know who's ever been hurt, has the same images in their mind. you've captured it nicely :)
Thanks Archana :):)
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