e insaan..
tanhayee ke tum khud hi maalik,kyun saap paalte rahe tum virana?
kyun chandan bane rahe tum?
utar jayenge ye saap to koi aur base..
e insaan..
banjar me bhi paani mile,
kate hue pairon ko raahat mile,
vish ka vishay chodo,
aage sheher hai bada suhana....
2 comments:
I like this better...like you're gazing at life this poem goes with your dp hehe doesn't it?
Who sd ur Hindi ain't gud?? It's amazing...ek baat to sahi hai, insaan ko chandan ban kar nahi rehna chahiye, warna uspar saap lipattne lagte hai...lekin ek aur baat bhi hai, Kabirdas ne kaha hai ki chandan pe chahe kitne bhi saap liptte, uspar apna kitna bhi vish kyun na thooke, uski khusboo par uska koi asar nahi hota...agar yeh kavita tum par aadharit thi, to ek baat yakeen ke saath keh sakti hoon...maine jo abhi abhi kaha, woh tum par lagoo hai :)
Khair, yeh sab chhodo...tumhari kavita bahut pasand aaya :) aur yeh kehne ke liye pata nahi aur kya kya kaha!
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